the secret meeting of the underworld

March 10, 2010
she was angel
she was taken away from her mother
they wanted to make her a demon
they made her gullotine her own mother and cremate her body
they made her execute brutal unknown creatures
they soon made her fearless and heartless
they made her a fiend
they made her indestructible....
she grew up with hatred and vengence in her heart
as time passed she was becoming a punisher...
she started executing them
she started destructing their underworld
fear was growing in their hearts
they were being terrorized by the demon they created
they were determined to emprison her
they captured her and locked her in a vault
they chained her and left her to such unknown
thirsty and brutal predators seeking the blood of a weak pry
yet their population continued to decrease vastly
they knew she broke free
but no one dared go to the vault
to ensure that she had not broken free
they knew if she was not destructed soon the underworld would
become extinct or enslaved by her
one night they held a secret meeting in the
forest by a lonely stream
it was the entire nation of the underworld
i was standing behind a tree
they all came together to come up with a strategy
to destruct the fiend that walks among them
while they were holding their secret meeting a sudden
wind blew carrying the fragrance of stained blood
that lingered upon her garments
they felt her latent presence that peterified them
but it was not a second later that i heard the shrieking of dead souls
and saw a stream of blood with floating headless bodies
dismembered ones, eyeless ones, faceless ones
and ghastly wounded ones
she stood there breathing heavily with an evil smirk upon her face
while a sudden rain washed the blood of her face and body
she stood still
so powerful, so majestic, so magnificent, so indestructible
so mesmerizing---
i was paralyzed with such a fascinating sight
but she soon turned to me
i caught a glimpse of her dazzling eye
it was the eye of a Devil
she slowly approached me and we were soon face-to-face
she gave me her sword and bowed before my very eyes
it was a moment of awe as i watched her walk toward the stream of blood
and vanish.......





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MidnightAngel7 said...
Aug. 28, 2010 at 10:13 pm
I totally love this!! It is so amazing! Once again, it took me there. And I <3 you for liking Adam Lambert!!! I totally love him!!! ALl your work is amazing!
 
condor replied...
Aug. 29, 2010 at 12:15 pm
OMG THANKS SO MUCH ;]
 
Squishy-Squish said...
Jul. 4, 2010 at 7:43 pm
→Yeah she's right. It's awesome. Very creative by the way. Nice one :)
 
condor replied...
Jul. 7, 2010 at 7:26 pm
omg thanks so much :)
 
BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 9:20 pm
I love the title. it sounds so diabolical and yet warm and fuzzy at the same time, like you're gonna creep up on some royal guy in the cloak of darkness and overthrow him with a nice cup of hot tea. very creative peice. I like it.
 
condor replied...
Apr. 24, 2010 at 10:46 pm
awwwwwwww thank you so very much i thought i post all of my poetry work and here for nothing and that maybe no one actually reads it but thank you for liking it.... ^_^
 
BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 25, 2010 at 2:19 am
hey, your like article number 188266, and its not like people scroll down the list of poetry like I did. it would be easier if you were the first or last-its just that its hard for people to read your stuff cause your between thousands. but if someone magically stumbled across it-theyd like it.
 
condor replied...
Apr. 25, 2010 at 2:47 pm
omg i never knew that lol...i just pick articles randomly and read them lol...but good to know...thx <3
 
Keji K. said...
Mar. 25, 2010 at 10:57 pm
sorry for misspelling some words.....
 
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