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It saddens me to think
That in the garbage is our friendship
Just a couple months ago
Whenever I was with you
My cheeks would be tickled pink.
We were attached by the hip.

Obviously things have changed
But I know I am a good friend
No matter what you say.
I know what type of friend I am.
I feel so completely deranged
To think that this is the end.

Everywhere I go
In reminds me of you.
My cabin, Great America
The park, my softball games
For a while we were in such a flow
Maybe it was too good to be true.

It is going to be weird
to no longer have you in my life
because for a while
you were always there.
But nothing is cleared
when you’re not my wife.

I don’t deserve this
after having such a good heart
I prayed for you at every chance I could
And was always there for you
Though I still wish you a life with bliss
I just wish I could be part.





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Squishy-Squish said...
Jul. 4, 2010 at 7:47 pm
→Nice one kid. Sad, but true. Things happen though...
 
jill456 said...
Apr. 12, 2010 at 10:35 pm
this one made me sad :( it's a nice portrayal of acceptance, but the reluctance to really accept its over. nice write!
 
punksk8rgurll said...
Apr. 12, 2010 at 4:27 pm
I love it hun. Very good. Definatly most of the friendships that go on around here.
 
Sarita15 said...
Apr. 11, 2010 at 2:38 am
I really like this.  I could feel the emotions as I was reading it :). 
 
Jan-o Wizard said...
Mar. 28, 2010 at 7:08 pm
This poem exhibits your versatility as an author. It shows off your ability to write about dark feelings as well as light. I felt the tension as I was reading it, but at the end, it was clear to me that you're the mature one, and the other person is making a mistake by not repairing the relationship. It's a good reminder for us all to work on things, and not let them go easily.
 
poohbear777 said...
Mar. 28, 2010 at 12:21 pm
This one really stirred my emotions.  Nice quality.
 
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