For Life

March 10, 2010
By thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry that it's over, smile because it has happened."


A friend,
Is like,
A window,
Being opened.

You finally,
Get to experience,
The world,
and life,
instead of,
staring at a
bland windowless wall.

Life,
Would be extinct,
And dull
Without her,
Like staring
At that wall.

Loneliness,
Would hover,
Like a cloud
Not doing anything
But sadness
And trouble.

She helps you,
Open the window
Alone,
But you know
You can’t,
Which is why
You’re so glad
She’s there
For life.


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This article has 6 comments.


on May. 24 2010 at 5:56 pm
wow you are TALENTED! im gonna show your poems to all my friends! :)

on May. 24 2010 at 5:55 pm
wow love the ending!!

murphgirl said...
on May. 24 2010 at 5:55 pm
so true! you write like a professional. love this piece

wheato said...
on May. 24 2010 at 5:54 pm
love the message in this poem!

jill456 said...
on Apr. 12 2010 at 10:34 pm
SO true!! i agree with jan-o wizard. you have a huge variety of poetry. i never know what i'm gonna get with you...a lot must happen in your life! keep up the good work! can't wait to read more!

Jan-o Wizard said...
on Mar. 28 2010 at 7:13 pm

I read this one directly after "The End," and was relieved for the refreshing change. Again you have a talent for conveying different moods.

I was struck in this poem by your creative use of punctuation. It's not what I would have expected at first, but it made me think twice about the rhythm that you were feeling in your head when you wrote it.



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