Without You

March 10, 2010
By Anonymous

Every single step
Farther from you
Is closer up
To being through.

Every decision I make
That was decided on my own
Makes a small lake
Into a vast ocean.

I can feel myself hiking
To the top of the mountain
And all without thinking
Without you I won’t win.

I can compete
In my own solitude
And this I will complete
With my own attitude.

Because I don’t need you
To sum up who I’ll be
I will stay true
Just wait, you’ll see.

I feel myself growing
As a person, as am I.
I am glowing
And quietly, I say goodbye.

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This article has 6 comments.

nerdalert said...
on May. 20 2010 at 5:54 pm
great!! one of my favorites

on May. 20 2010 at 5:53 pm
genius! i love this poem!!

Aifan said...
on May. 20 2010 at 5:52 pm
love it! brilliantly written as always

readingirl said...
on May. 20 2010 at 5:52 pm
this has a tone of self-acceptance. i can feel your confidence increasing through every word. it rubbed off! though this poem was based off something sad, it made me happy. love it!

on Apr. 11 2010 at 9:53 pm
Pitiful_Anonymous PLATINUM, New Cumberland, West Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"and all you f***ers go beep beep beep in cheap,plastic cars. If It's to dumb to see or say you'll still sing it, and I'll just cue the applause" - Marilyn Manson

This is very good... I like your word choice, and its something i can relate to very well.

PrezLover101 said...
on Mar. 30 2010 at 6:48 pm
I went through something like that, too. I like your choice of words :)

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