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Let's Go To Paradise

March 10, 2010
By Mercy03 SILVER, Des Moines, Washington
Mercy03 SILVER, Des Moines, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"Just because you can, doesn't mean you should." - Acheron


Take me away to a place I can feel
Where the winds and the rains are forever calm
Where the grass is green on both sides of the fence
Where no matter how long you’re in the tub you never wrinkle up.

Take me away to a place I can live
Where children can fufill all their dreams
Where adults always have enough money
Where the elderly are not taken for granted or given limits.

Take me away to a place that doesn’t hurt
Where teenage hearts can prosper
Where the widowded can find love again
Where children and ‘puppy love’ are taken seriously

Take me away to a place far away
Where the people are new
Where everyone knows your name
Where the coffee shops are different and there isn’t one Starbucks

Take me away to Paradise
Where I can meet with my loved ones again
Where life doesn’t seem so pressured
Where you and I can rest peacefully together every morning and play every night.

Take me away to a place where we can be together
And not judged or told what we do is wrong because of our
Age, race, backgrounds, raisings, income, clothing, friends, parents,
or living status.

Take me away, and I’ll take you and together we can play in the neverending field.
Take me away from my problems and I’ll take you
Take me away.
And I’ll take you.


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lattelover said...
on May. 11 2010 at 8:07 pm
You are amazing and extremely talented Cynthia!   Follow your dreams.....I know whatever you choose in life you will be successful

Bubba said...
on May. 8 2010 at 1:26 pm
Well all i can say is that it sounds like heaven. I loved it don't stop writing. Truelly AMAZING!

Julie said...
on May. 7 2010 at 3:33 pm

Your writings are so passionate, you always make me think...hmmm.  Great Job, continue to write and share your thought for everyone to enjoy, I know I do.

 

Love,

Auntie Julie


Eebony said...
on May. 7 2010 at 10:16 am

That is beautiful, please don't ever stop writing. 

Love 

Mom#2


Infinity said...
on Mar. 29 2010 at 9:22 am
You already know. :D