Defeat

March 10, 2010
By lauren_b SILVER, Flower Mound, Texas
lauren_b SILVER, Flower Mound, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"If you love something set it free, if their meant to be with you, they'll come back"


The battle cries
The defeat takes over
I run to comlete solitude
escape to my familiar place;
Abandonment.

The bitter silence of failure strikes at me.
When everyone i see collects,
I lose.
But my path never strays,
I'm me,
I fly through the skies
I hold the world true on my back
I breathe the air we all consume
Why does this affliction dominate me.

I salvage my remains to another beginning.
I take challenge
I take freedom
I take me!


The author's comments:
This poem was written for my friend. This is about her. I love it.. :D

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on Mar. 23 2010 at 5:59 pm
MollyLager GOLD, Huntingdon, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
\"The real trouble with reality is that there\'s no background music.\"

I really like the imagery you used. Great poem! :)




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