Hurt Me

March 15, 2010
By RoseWhite SILVER, Valrico, Florida
RoseWhite SILVER, Valrico, Florida
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Would you hurt me,
If I handed you
The knife
(The gun)
(The lie).
If I told you
(Asked you)
(Begged you).
Promised you
If you would
Break me.

(I could, you know).
You gave it to me,
So neatly.
All I needed,
Your voice,
(Your lie).
Not mine,
Never mine,
After all.
It fits.
You were never mine.

You cried,
So prettily.
I wanted to paint your face,
In blue and black and red,
And see
If they would mix.
Would your tears turn
If I screamed?

Would you still love me,
Call me pretty wonders,
In words like glitter
Lovely love?
I could
Your hurt
And hold it for you,
Until you came back.
I could hurt for you,
If you asked.

Would you ask?
Just this once?
If I cried,
In our pain,
Would you take it from me?
Or leave me,

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.king. SILVER said...
on Feb. 23 2012 at 12:19 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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Awesomeness, I really love the last three lines, "So prettily." sounds kinda strange for me :/ , This could use a little more emotion, Very good and sweet write Thanks for the Excellent share !

on Jun. 14 2010 at 11:24 pm
Acalleq PLATINUM, Togiak, Alaska
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you never know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have

this is very good

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