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is someone there?

March 9, 2010
By MizzLizzyLizLiz PLATINUM, El Cajon, California
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MizzLizzyLizLiz PLATINUM, El Cajon, California
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someone is there
can't seem to forget about it
is it true love?
i don't know...
why is it that i'm with you
everything seems right
i think about you every waking moment
why can't you get out of my head!
why do i have weird feeling?
why are you always here?!
damn it! stay out of my life!
...i can't say that
you're always on my mind
i can never let go
reminds of a drug
not enough until i get it all
please let me go...
yet i don't need to
why am i saying this...?
i'm falling for you

© Jon G., Bethesda, MD

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sleeplessdreamer PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 4 2010 at 1:29 pm
sleeplessdreamer PLATINUM, Raleigh, North Carolina
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I like the idea of the structure being like a conversation (a struggle) within oneself. The only problem with this is it really does go like thoughts usually do: a little scatterbrained. It was kind of choppy and difficult to read. But if you perfect this idea of talking to yourself, it could be something great. I definitely see potential though.