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Crimson Cloud of rain

please rain
come again
collect yourself in your crimson clouds
fall upon my land
send your diamond droplets
let them trickle on my hands
clap and roar your thunder
strike fear into me
show me your strength
send me your winds
blow the trees
whip my hair
i dance in your power
showering myself in your tears
to hide my own
cleansing my soul
in the waters of the heavens
the rain has stopped
the sun radiates
through the crimson clouds
lifting me to the sky
show me your true self
please rain come again
cleanse the dangerous world
in which i live in
i feel your beauty as i embrace your rainbow



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lunaEccentric said...
Mar. 28, 2010 at 5:12 pm:

That was beautiful! I love the rain and your descriptions were perfectly amazing! Loved it and LOVE it!

 

Will you read some of mine?

 
mindymax replied...
Apr. 8, 2010 at 2:37 pm :
thank you im glad to finally read some comments sure i'll read some=)
 
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