Crimson Cloud of rain

March 9, 2010
By mindymax GOLD, Armona, California
mindymax GOLD, Armona, California
10 articles 0 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The whole world looked drunk, and I liked it that way." - Rebeca Godfrey, book title"The Torn skirt"


please rain
come again
collect yourself in your crimson clouds
fall upon my land
send your diamond droplets
let them trickle on my hands
clap and roar your thunder
strike fear into me
show me your strength
send me your winds
blow the trees
whip my hair
i dance in your power
showering myself in your tears
to hide my own
cleansing my soul
in the waters of the heavens
the rain has stopped
the sun radiates
through the crimson clouds
lifting me to the sky
show me your true self
please rain come again
cleanse the dangerous world
in which i live in
i feel your beauty as i embrace your rainbow


The author's comments:
" 'prayer, the last refugee of a scoundrel ',"

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mindymax GOLD said...
on Apr. 8 2010 at 2:37 pm
mindymax GOLD, Armona, California
10 articles 0 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The whole world looked drunk, and I liked it that way." - Rebeca Godfrey, book title"The Torn skirt"

thank you im glad to finally read some comments sure i'll read some=)

HPGGMRAR GOLD said...
on Mar. 28 2010 at 5:12 pm
HPGGMRAR GOLD, Kennesaw, Georgia
14 articles 6 photos 91 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I musn't forget I'm alive."
Ray Bradbury (Dandelion Wine)

That was beautiful! I love the rain and your descriptions were perfectly amazing! Loved it and LOVE it!

 

Will you read some of mine?





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