Evil Angel

March 8, 2010
By sharadyn PLATINUM, Creve Coeur, Illinois
sharadyn PLATINUM, Creve Coeur, Illinois
25 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When the power of love over comes the love of power, then the world will know peace"


Darkness fills my night
my mind.
my eyes.
my sky.

The whisperes in the dark are speaking
loudly
clearly
but so softly

Your wings are so coarse
yet so smooth
You're enchanting, like a siren
I only have my life to lose

Words are not needed
for the comunications
to be understood

Words are backed by nothing
So shallow
your toes dont even get damp

The night sky
is the mask
of all sad
and all gone

The night is my prime.
my soul is at home.
Darkness is common

In the world of the dead
no one needs to see
to speeak
or to hear

The dead can speak
to one another
through their silent screams
of anquish and of regret

Their care taker
so dark and so gloomy
only to be seen in the absence of light
hangs her head in silence

To show respect of the dead
We see these people everyday
Who hang their heads
have nothing to say

Darkness has flooded their worlds
taken over their lights.
keeping them alive.
solely at night.

Wake up little child
you have so much to look forward upon
you have your life
mine, is gone.

Save your self from the angel of darkness
for once she has your soul
there is no turning back

Keep your head up little child
mistakes are ment to be made
be smart young child
dont let her persuade

Becasue she took me
to the grave with her in the day
woke me up at night
forver nocturnal

Darkness has filled my nights.
my mind.
my sky.
my eyes


The author's comments:
The inspiration came from a song that I am fond of, Evil Angel, by Breaking Benjamin.

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jkhjk said...
on Jul. 13 2010 at 1:30 pm
jkhjk, -, New York
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whoa. this is really good. I love that song and Anthem of the Angels. Those are my two favorites.

on Mar. 29 2010 at 6:05 pm
Ashlyn_Starr PLATINUM, Oak Grove, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Life often feels like it's spinning. Just stop and look at the design being made."~ Advice given to me by my aunt Kaitlyn

I'm a big fan of the song Evil Angel as well. This was an amazing poem girl! Great work!

on Mar. 24 2010 at 9:27 pm
sharadyn PLATINUM, Creve Coeur, Illinois
25 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When the power of love over comes the love of power, then the world will know peace"

i have been writing since i could write.

Cigg.Sunn GOLD said...
on Mar. 23 2010 at 2:26 pm
Cigg.Sunn GOLD, Avondale, Arizona
12 articles 0 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When we were yonger, we used to think dandelions were flowers, it's not until we grew up that we begun calling them flowers. Dandelions never changed. Our standards did."

Perfect poetry is what i'd like to call this peice, because it is.

on Mar. 21 2010 at 11:25 pm
Frog-Prince PLATINUM, Lakeside, California
33 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Peace is not the absence of conflict, but the ability to cope with it"

breaking benjamin is my favorite band and evil agnel is my favorit song of them. this is my favorite poem i have ever read i can relate so well to it. pure beautifull talent. when did you start writing?

on Mar. 21 2010 at 8:47 pm
sharadyn PLATINUM, Creve Coeur, Illinois
25 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When the power of love over comes the love of power, then the world will know peace"

lol yes they do i was listening to it when i composed the poem

on Mar. 20 2010 at 1:12 pm
writergirl13 GOLD, Cherry Hill, New Jersey
11 articles 8 photos 261 comments

Favorite Quote:
All are lunatics, but he who can analyze his delusions is called a philosopher.
Ambrose Bierce

wow! terribly, frighteningly, exquisitely beautiful!

kenna2013 GOLD said...
on Mar. 19 2010 at 7:38 pm
kenna2013 GOLD, Corinth, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"love begins with a smile,grows with a kiss,and ends with a teardrop."

I cant think of anything elsle to say but this: Truly Beautiful

on Mar. 19 2010 at 6:06 pm
deardiary BRONZE, Saskatoon, Other
3 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
It is a truth universally acknowedged, that a single man in possession of a good fortune, must be in want of a wife. -Pride and Prejudice

Wow. beautiful

on Mar. 19 2010 at 6:01 pm
x0x0Luckyx0x0 SILVER, Enterprise, Utah
6 articles 2 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Killing under the cloak of war is still murder.."-Albert Einstein.

Breaking Benjamin has a song called Evil Angel:]

Good work! Keep it up.

DylanL BRONZE said...
on Mar. 19 2010 at 5:56 pm
DylanL BRONZE, Brisbane, Other
4 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
What can Make you, can also break you.

That's an awesome song :) and your text is amazing :) keep writing because i'll keep reading :)




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