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Darkness fills my night
my mind.
my eyes.
my sky.

The whisperes in the dark are speaking
loudly
clearly
but so softly

Your wings are so coarse
yet so smooth
You're enchanting, like a siren
I only have my life to lose

Words are not needed
for the comunications
to be understood

Words are backed by nothing
So shallow
your toes dont even get damp

The night sky
is the mask
of all sad
and all gone

The night is my prime.
my soul is at home.
Darkness is common

In the world of the dead
no one needs to see
to speeak
or to hear

The dead can speak
to one another
through their silent screams
of anquish and of regret

Their care taker
so dark and so gloomy
only to be seen in the absence of light
hangs her head in silence

To show respect of the dead
We see these people everyday
Who hang their heads
have nothing to say

Darkness has flooded their worlds
taken over their lights.
keeping them alive.
solely at night.

Wake up little child
you have so much to look forward upon
you have your life
mine, is gone.

Save your self from the angel of darkness
for once she has your soul
there is no turning back

Keep your head up little child
mistakes are ment to be made
be smart young child
dont let her persuade

Becasue she took me
to the grave with her in the day
woke me up at night
forver nocturnal

Darkness has filled my nights.
my mind.
my sky.
my eyes



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darkpersonality said...
Jul. 13, 2010 at 1:30 pm
whoa. this is really good. I love that song and Anthem of the Angels. Those are my two favorites.
 
Ashlynn_Starr said...
Mar. 29, 2010 at 6:05 pm
I'm a big fan of the song Evil Angel as well. This was an amazing poem girl! Great work!
 
Cigg.Sun said...
Mar. 23, 2010 at 2:26 pm
Perfect poetry is what i'd like to call this peice, because it is.
 
frog-prince said...
Mar. 21, 2010 at 11:25 pm
breaking benjamin is my favorite band and evil agnel is my favorit song of them. this is my favorite poem i have ever read i can relate so well to it. pure beautifull talent. when did you start writing?
 
sharadyn replied...
Mar. 24, 2010 at 9:27 pm
i have been writing since i could write.
 
sharadyn said...
Mar. 21, 2010 at 8:47 pm
lol yes they do i was listening to it when i composed the poem
 
writergirl13 said...
Mar. 20, 2010 at 1:12 pm
wow! terribly, frighteningly, exquisitely beautiful!
 
kenna2013 said...
Mar. 19, 2010 at 7:38 pm
I cant think of anything elsle to say but this: Truly Beautiful
 
deardiary said...
Mar. 19, 2010 at 6:06 pm
Wow. beautiful
 
x0x0Luckyx0x0 said...
Mar. 19, 2010 at 6:01 pm
Breaking Benjamin has a song called Evil Angel:]
Good work! Keep it up.
 
DylanL said...
Mar. 19, 2010 at 5:56 pm
That's an awesome song :) and your text is amazing :) keep writing because i'll keep reading :)
 
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