Tears

March 5, 2010
By amazingkp. BRONZE, Lemars, Iowa
amazingkp. BRONZE, Lemars, Iowa
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My tears drop to the ground
I blink trying to keep them inside
But I can't
They keep flowing out
Like a waterfall
I feel horrible inside
Sometimes I feel like I need to cry
Just let it all out
In the end,
I wipe my eyes
Stand up
And I am ready to move on
With my life.



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on Jun. 16 2010 at 10:55 am
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

Wow i love this!!! this is awesome-soooo good!!! please check out some of my work-it would mean a lot!!!! thanks

on Jun. 1 2010 at 1:23 pm
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

I know I've already commented on this at some pt, but I just re-read it and fell in love with this poem all over again!

on May. 11 2010 at 7:19 am
amazingkp. BRONZE, Lemars, Iowa
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Thank you so much!!! :-) I am so glad you like it! :-)

on May. 11 2010 at 7:19 am
amazingkp. BRONZE, Lemars, Iowa
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Your welcome for posting on your article. And thank you so so much!!! It means a lot to me that people like my work. When i first got on here i thought nobody was going to look at my work and you know i guess i was wrong. Thanks so much! :-)

on May. 10 2010 at 4:42 pm
Muzic4MeAlwayz SILVER, Wilmington, Delaware
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Favorite Quote:
"Love is a perfect bond of union."

Hey thanks for commenting on my demi lovato article...and this is a beautiful poem very deep :)

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on May. 8 2010 at 12:08 pm
Howler GOLD, Cerritos, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is not abut the number of breaths you take but about the moments that take your breath away"

hey! I like this one! Its simple and really good!

on May. 7 2010 at 8:23 pm
amazingkp. BRONZE, Lemars, Iowa
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Thanks so much! I am happy people are liking my writings. If you want you can look at some of my other writings??

on Apr. 15 2010 at 3:07 pm
shelterisland GOLD, Montclair, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
-Biting's excellent. It's like kissing only there's a winner."-Doctor Who, The Tardis

i like this, good job.

on Apr. 7 2010 at 7:50 am
amazingkp. BRONZE, Lemars, Iowa
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Thank you so much!!! Thanks! I am glad you liked it.

on Apr. 6 2010 at 4:06 pm
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

I like this... I'm the type to hold and bottle everything in.. [i hate crying.. shhh... ] lol but the way you wrote this and the way it came together in the end is pretty good.

on Mar. 24 2010 at 7:41 am
amazingkp. BRONZE, Lemars, Iowa
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Feel free to comment on the poem. Thanks!




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