Without You

March 4, 2010
By teenbookworm14 PLATINUM, Plainfield, Connecticut
teenbookworm14 PLATINUM, Plainfield, Connecticut
41 articles 0 photos 164 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Nothing gold can stay" -Robert Frost


The days keep passing by.
And there's not a moment when I don't think of you.
I think I died,
when you said that we were through.
You made my life worth living.
But since we're over,
I'm back to drinking and driving.
The rain is pouring down,
faster and faster.
I'm falling around,
what a stupid disaster.
My heart still thinks there's a way out,
but my mind knows it's over.
I'm trying to shout;
why couldn't I be sober?
All of a sudden I'm lying on your lawn.
I look up to see you staring down at me.
You tell me I can make it, it's almost dawn,
But it's too late,
I've been set free.



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on Aug. 29 2010 at 12:32 am
teenbookworm14 PLATINUM, Plainfield, Connecticut
41 articles 0 photos 164 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Nothing gold can stay" -Robert Frost

thank you!! :)

on Aug. 29 2010 at 12:32 am
teenbookworm14 PLATINUM, Plainfield, Connecticut
41 articles 0 photos 164 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Nothing gold can stay" -Robert Frost

thank you so much! :)

on Aug. 28 2010 at 10:29 am
Smile,Iloveyou SILVER, Valdosta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"Writing eases my suffering. Its my souls medicine. I write what I want to write about. I write when I hurt. I write what I fear. Writing is my form of personal freedom. I write to save myself. I write to survive as an individual." -Unknown.

i love it!! 

on Aug. 25 2010 at 8:29 am
xxjasmineibxx GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
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3 words that describes life. It goes on. You can never be certain on how life will play out and you just have to wish on a star and hope for the best.

This is amazing! You really have a lot of talent. Keep writing!

on Aug. 5 2010 at 3:10 am
teenbookworm14 PLATINUM, Plainfield, Connecticut
41 articles 0 photos 164 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Nothing gold can stay" -Robert Frost

thanks so much for your comment and your advice! ill remember it!

on Aug. 4 2010 at 6:56 am
Chrome_Clouds SILVER, Winterport, Maine
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I love the end to the poem; it just kind of hits you, but it almost seems a little emotionless toward the beginning.  KEEP WRITING

on Jul. 26 2010 at 1:27 am
teenbookworm14 PLATINUM, Plainfield, Connecticut
41 articles 0 photos 164 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Nothing gold can stay" -Robert Frost

i know! i posted those 8 poems about 3 weeks ago and they're still not submitted!

on Jul. 26 2010 at 1:26 am
teenbookworm14 PLATINUM, Plainfield, Connecticut
41 articles 0 photos 164 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Nothing gold can stay" -Robert Frost

thank you so much! i definitely will keep writing, and yeah, that'll be the day, haha ;)

on Jul. 24 2010 at 8:39 am
Pitiful_Anonymous PLATINUM, New Cumberland, West Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"and all you f***ers go beep beep beep in cheap,plastic cars. If It's to dumb to see or say you'll still sing it, and I'll just cue the applause" - Marilyn Manson

This is great! you really did good with this one, very emotional and real, i like!

Keep writing stuff like this, and sweetheart, you will be livin the life of the rich and famous haha :)


on Jul. 12 2010 at 10:21 am
smilebright BRONZE, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
"Your only in trouble if you get caught"- Aladdin

It sucks how long it take to gat a poem approved. i also have work waiting

on Jul. 11 2010 at 11:26 pm
teenbookworm14 PLATINUM, Plainfield, Connecticut
41 articles 0 photos 164 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Nothing gold can stay" -Robert Frost

thanks x 10!!!! :D

on Jul. 11 2010 at 11:26 pm
teenbookworm14 PLATINUM, Plainfield, Connecticut
41 articles 0 photos 164 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Nothing gold can stay" -Robert Frost

thanks! :) i will don't worry, i actually just sent the editors 8 new poems but they're 'pending approval' so they should be up in a few days

on Jul. 11 2010 at 3:54 pm
smilebright BRONZE, Las Vegas, Nevada
1 article 0 photos 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Your only in trouble if you get caught"- Aladdin

You have talent. I'd like to see some of your other work. keep posting!

on Jul. 10 2010 at 8:09 am
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

whoa. there was SOO much meaning in this. that was brilliant. good job :)




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