March 3, 2010
Th weather is warm,but your heart is cold.
It cannot be warmed by the suns rays.
But just like the sun, you leave a burn.

A burn that will hurt for a while. As I walk down the street, people can see my red skin.

They cannot see the scars on my heart.
Only those who bother to search will ever know that I have them.

You are like the moon.
So cold, mysterious, so dark like the night.
You stand as tall as the tallest tree in the forest.

But your roots dont go deep.
As soon as the first gust of wind comes, you fall.
You are nowhere near as strong as you thought you were.

And your scars will be visible, after some time.
You will rot like the fallen tree you are.
Only then will you see that you needed me.

But it will be too late.
I will have already found someone.
Someone who needs me.
They didnt have to lose me, to figure it out.

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krazykelsey said...
Jun. 30, 2010 at 1:21 pm
wow you are really good. i like it alot it is so good. i can really feel the emotion behide it. i loved it.
lostnhim replied...
Jun. 30, 2010 at 2:10 pm
Thanks!!!(: Im glad that you liked it!!!(:
MoonlitxRose said...
Jun. 10, 2010 at 12:24 pm
Whoa! Deep poem! I really liked reading this and the title name is very fitting to! Nice job on writing this!
lostnhim replied...
Jun. 10, 2010 at 8:01 pm
Thank you SO ou are so sweet! (:
avmbookworm said...
Jun. 8, 2010 at 9:22 pm
I love this poem! Just go through and edit out the little mistakes so that it looks as perfect as it sounds.
lostnhim replied...
Jun. 9, 2010 at 6:26 pm
Thanks! ( How do I do that? Ive been trying to find some way to edit a couple of my poems, but I cant figure out how..) (:
avmbookworm replied...
Jun. 9, 2010 at 9:12 pm
you should have friends or family read your stuff before you post, because a lot of the time its hard to see your own mistakes, and sometimes its even just simple typing mistakes like in this poem where a few words are missing letters or spaces in the right places.
lostnhim replied...
Jun. 10, 2010 at 7:27 am
Good idea....!!!! Thanks!!!(:
avmbookworm replied...
Jun. 10, 2010 at 7:45 am
No problem! Keep writing though, you have talent!
lostnhim replied...
Jun. 10, 2010 at 7:55 pm
Thanks! (:
flash said...
Mar. 19, 2010 at 7:50 am
C - Scars: this is beautiful and so poignant. Love your thought processes.
lostnhim replied...
Mar. 19, 2010 at 6:54 pm
Thanks, im glad that you liked it!
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