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Hell
Is where I dwell
Where I am bound
To the ground
This labyrinth
Where I’ve stayed for the month
Dark and cold
With no one to hold.
I run
Only to be outdone.
I fall
Only to hit a wall.
I am scared
If only anyone cared.
Now lost
If only I had known the cost.
I am alone
With nothing not even a stone.
I sit
Only to wish I could quit.
But I did
And this was bid.
If only I had known
I could have atoned.
Now gone
I feel withdrawn.
Now with nothing left
I am bereft.



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BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 12, 2010 at 5:28 pm:
this is really -----....5 stars.
 
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dojorockergirlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 9, 2010 at 6:22 pm:
i love this piece!!! its hecka good. you really should write a book.
 
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MR.EHT said...
Mar. 19, 2010 at 12:00 pm:
this is reallygood
i love this one
have you ever thought about writing a book
Because this is very very very good
a lot of people can relate to this
 
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