My Hell

March 2, 2010
By AmberRose SILVER, Richmond, Virginia
AmberRose SILVER, Richmond, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Even Monkeys fall out of trees."

Is where I dwell
Where I am bound
To the ground
This labyrinth
Where I’ve stayed for the month
Dark and cold
With no one to hold.
I run
Only to be outdone.
I fall
Only to hit a wall.
I am scared
If only anyone cared.
Now lost
If only I had known the cost.
I am alone
With nothing not even a stone.
I sit
Only to wish I could quit.
But I did
And this was bid.
If only I had known
I could have atoned.
Now gone
I feel withdrawn.
Now with nothing left
I am bereft.

The author's comments:
What I imagine hell to be and feel like... something again that just came to me.

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this is really -----....5 stars.

on Apr. 9 2010 at 6:22 pm
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1. "Cowards die a thousands times before their death, but the Valiant taste death all but once."
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i love this piece!!! its hecka good. you really should write a book.

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on Mar. 19 2010 at 12:00 pm
thebest BRONZE, Egg Harbor Township, New Jersey
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indifference to evil is evil-Elie Wiesel

this is reallygood

i love this one

have you ever thought about writing a book

Because this is very very very good

a lot of people can relate to this

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