go back to the start

March 1, 2010
By , homestead, FL
what if you had a choice?
the choice i was to make
caught upon all the mistake
what would you do?
cross a path deserted leaves
wondering if it ws right
not seeing though it might
what would you do?
just as serious as the next
go back to the start
my thoughts occuring again
life full of choosing of picks
longing this choice to fix
just go back to the start
no fairness of wanting this part
i've made up my wanting
i'll start again
these past memories still haunting
your choosing is ending
my old truths are mending
stop and think it twice
a new path wouldn't that be nice
go back to the start.

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Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 20, 2010 at 7:17 am
wow this is awesome!!! the last two lines are my fav. part-i great way to close it!!! this is a great message and you used it well!!! please check out some of my work when you get the chance!!! i think you would like 'stay for tomorrow."
h1m_rocks replied...
Jun. 22, 2010 at 8:21 pm
omg thanx a million. i really appreciate ur comment of you liking my poem. thnx again. sure will. ^.^
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