A Love / Hate Poem

February 28, 2010
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I had a great time
last night.
I'll call you
in the morning --
I love you.
It was a night never
to forget.

Was it really what I felt?
like nothing really
matters anymore.
You told me you were
going to call me.
You never did.
I called you.
Why didn't you answer?

A person's love is
not to be
used and thrown away.
Do you play this game with everyone?
Why me?

Was it the jacket I wore,
or maybe
this is just a bad dream.

Tomorrow will come

around the corner.





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bkcrider92 said...
Apr. 27, 2010 at 10:54 am
Excelent! I can totally relate! Please read my work id love to hear your view! =D
 
xXLoveHugsXx said...
Apr. 26, 2010 at 5:56 pm
:) awesomeness!! :)
 
acardenas2010 said...
Apr. 26, 2010 at 4:46 pm
that is so good. i love it
 
JesusFreak314 said...
Apr. 23, 2010 at 4:07 pm
Oh my gosh  i tottally relate! :))
 
dirtbiker2012 said...
Apr. 23, 2010 at 10:45 am
I love it!!! Great job! I think everyone can relate to that!
 
ItsaFunnyThing said...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 5:34 pm
i like it lots! great job :)
 
only1life said...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 11:09 am

only have 1 word 2 say. Amazing!!!

 

 
kdiddy. said...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 7:50 am
that's really good(:
 
always-sunshine said...
Apr. 20, 2010 at 11:16 am
i really like it
 
Jessi9077 replied...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 7:46 am
I love it, it was an awsome poem.
 
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