Pomegranate 1908

February 28, 2010
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Strange fruit hanging
from a pomegranate tree,
Torn open
like lightning escaping from the clouds,
Torn up
with darkness making the sky cry,
Torn down
like a broken dream.





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onlyiz said...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 7:24 pm
i liked so much how you went from torn open to up to down. and don't feel like you have to explain yourself so much. the first time i read it was before i read your comments and it was cool.
 
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