Thirst

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The darkness covers up
a part of her eyes

Her hair flows down
like a dead tree
crying for water





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Jade-McKaye said...
Apr. 29, 2010 at 9:51 am
i love how you can say so much in such a small amount of words, this is really good.
 
B.Mack replied...
Jun. 20, 2011 at 7:16 pm
thanks, i like your work too. keep it up sorry i comment so late
 
thewriteidea This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 22, 2010 at 5:43 pm
Although it's really short, I love the way you wrote this poem. You make every word a prize, where the reader wonders what the subtext really means. When I first read the title for this poem, I thought it would be a vampire's thirst, but I'm really not sure! Thanks for sharing and making me think. Check out some of my work, too if you'd like. Keep writing!
 
always-sunshine replied...
Apr. 26, 2010 at 2:53 pm
its really   u should check out my work
 
always-sunshine replied...
Apr. 26, 2010 at 2:54 pm
its really good
 
B.Mack replied...
Jun. 20, 2011 at 7:19 pm
thanks.keep writing
 
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