The Darkness Within Us

March 2, 2010
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I was walking.
endlessly in a hole of my own heart
blood ran down my hands
my blood
sadness overwhelmed me
Was this right?
did I really want this?
I continued to wonder though my thoughts
wanting time to stop
or at least restart my life
Tears ran down my checks
Death was in front of me
He gave me a cold smile
And I continued walking
I wanted to stop
I still wander forward
Wouldn't someone stop me?
no one came
the tears came harder
I inched closer to death
the light was gone
no one was coming
I was stuck
I couldn't turn back
I was on my way to death
and no one was going to stop me
This was the end
I was at death's door step
He grinned at me
and point towards his door
He wanted me to go
I didn't want to go
but he took me shoulder gently
and took me inside
Why did I do this I thought as we walked
This wasn't how it was supposed to go
I was going to die and be relieved of all my pain
But it's piling up
and it's not letting me forget
When Death and I came far enough in the room
the door closed
and then there was darkness

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Milo! said...
Mar. 11, 2010 at 4:21 pm
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.
Valor_Fox replied...
Mar. 14, 2010 at 11:33 am
Thank you!! :)
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