Magazine, website & books written by teens since 1989

Signs that you have a good life

A long needed break,
Full of sunshine and laughter,
And cool breezes,
That blow away sweat and worries.

Other siblings still have school,
Ha, Ha, Ha,
No sadness is felt,
For the lack of school oriented obligations.

My baby sister,
Heads off to her first day of Kindergarten,
And is the Heidi Klum of her hallway,
Walking with a confidence so many people would die for.

Time is spent splashing and wading,
In the pool on a cool, boiling day,
True, everything has to end sometime,
But certain things we have the joy of reliving.





Join the Discussion

This article has 4 comments. Post your own now!

Kenneth18 said...
Mar. 15, 2010 at 12:16 am
You're right, both of our poems (RE: True Beauty) are quite similar. Also, I really like your poem, and your own comment is very true!
 
rainlover1994 replied...
Mar. 15, 2010 at 4:43 pm
Thanks! Hope you can have an abundance of those moments :)
 
rainlover1994 replied...
Mar. 15, 2010 at 4:48 pm
BTW... <br /> I would love it :) if you could give me an opinion on something else I wrote
 
Milo! said...
Mar. 11, 2010 at 4:32 pm
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.
 
bRealTime banner ad on the left side
Site Feedback