March 4, 2010
Love is an unforgettable thing
Though many people forget
How much they love their dearest ones
Until their eyes are wet

The water helps the flowers grow
My grandma was my aid
Her warm and gentle touch
She taught me not to be afraid

My loved ones are forever
Locked up in my heart
I'll always keep them in there
Never will we part

When someone very close to you
Is living a life robust
Embracing them with love
Is truly a must

But only when those loved ones
Don't notice that you're there
Or even when they leave this world
You have to shed a tear

Tears show emotion
Not just what others see
It has a special impact
on someone I call me

I remember her
Though she doesn't remember me
Last she said my name
Is the best memory

Memories are special
Never will they repeat
Memories of my grandma
They are so concrete

Me and my grandma
My grandma and I
The two of us together
Our love can reach the sky

So listen my dear reader
To what I'm trying to say
Love and treasure those moments
Each and every day

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kevinm said...
Mar. 28, 2010 at 6:12 pm
this poem is really good.and thanks for what you wrote on my poem is amazing that other people read and like my poems. Thanks alot and i LOVE this one that you wrote
Shabanana replied...
Mar. 29, 2010 at 3:24 pm
thanks your was amazing too
KevinM replied...
Mar. 30, 2010 at 8:40 pm
your welcome i loved your poem and idk what the prob is but my poems aren't being published it is taking forever i will tell you when one of my better ones is published thanks
Shabanana replied...
Mar. 31, 2010 at 7:44 pm
same here. i have about 8 more poems that are waiting for an okay before they are published so im just going to have to wait. im looking forward to reading the rest of your poems and i will let you know when the rest of my poems are up.
Shabanana replied...
Apr. 2, 2010 at 4:09 pm
A few more of my poems were published... finally. please go check them out. thanks
tchlazar said...
Mar. 20, 2010 at 3:16 pm
omg this is beutiful gr8 job!!!!!! its so amazing
Shabanana replied...
Mar. 20, 2010 at 6:59 pm
Grandma Sarah said...
Mar. 18, 2010 at 4:47 pm
AAA... Its amazing!! I love you!!!
Shabanana replied...
Mar. 18, 2010 at 4:50 pm
thanks lu2
Zayde Jake said...
Mar. 18, 2010 at 12:30 pm
Magnificent piece of work, sensitive, well-written and exquisitely expressed. This poem has come from within a beautiful soul. Pleas keep on writing and share with others what you have within you. I anxiously await your next poem.
Shabanana replied...
Mar. 18, 2010 at 12:51 pm
Dear Zayde, Thanks so much. I never could have done it without you. And don'y worry there are 2 more on the way.
Milo! said...
Mar. 11, 2010 at 5:05 pm
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.
Shabanana replied...
Mar. 12, 2010 at 1:22 pm
Thank You. I have written many more poems and I may post them soon. I will definitely look at your poems. thanks again for commenting.
BleedingRose replied...
Mar. 18, 2010 at 10:55 am
Small world! I've seen both of your comments on other work, Milo!'s on mine, lolz! anyway, this was great! so sweet and touching, 5 stars! Mind commenting on some of my work? Thx!
Shabanana replied...
Mar. 18, 2010 at 11:31 am
Thanks Rose and i will definitely comment on your work.
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