Mistake

February 26, 2010
By xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
22 articles 0 photos 281 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The goal isn't to live forever, but create something that will."
"If you wanna go, baby let's go; if you wanna rock, I'm ready to roll.''
"No one ever said it'd be easy. They just said it'd be worth it." <3


Falling in love with you
was my biggest, most brutal
mistake.
For all also fell in love
with it's opposite,
notoriously known as hate;
I inevitably fell for
your childish bait;
The truth is, sweetheart, I
want to be free;
I wanna be able to watch
the sunset fall lazily just
over the horizon and no
longer see your cruel,
guilty face smothering it's
beauty;
I want to be able to smile,
and truly mean it;
Looking into your hypnotic
gaze tonight, I know for
certain, in the very center
of my aching body,
that falling in love with you was just one of my many
harsh mistakes



Similar Articles

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 5 comments.


on Apr. 15 2010 at 2:40 pm
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
22 articles 0 photos 281 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The goal isn't to live forever, but create something that will."
"If you wanna go, baby let's go; if you wanna rock, I'm ready to roll.''
"No one ever said it'd be easy. They just said it'd be worth it." <3

aww, thxx! i really appreciate the feedback!

on Mar. 27 2010 at 5:19 pm
FlyleafFreak DIAMOND, Loveland, Colorado
51 articles 0 photos 203 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I have faith in fools;self confidence my friends call it"~Edger Allan Poe
"In this world of infinite insanity, your friends are the best psychiatrists you will ever have."~Me

It just gets better and better, really good job, I can really relate to this one too. It's short, but there is a ton of depth. Amazing

on Mar. 10 2010 at 3:31 pm
xLoVeLyCuTiEe428x PLATINUM, Nanuet, New York
24 articles 0 photos 103 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To me, Fearless is not the absense of fear. It's not being completely unafraid. To me, Fearless is having fears. Fearless is having doubts. Lots of them. To me, Fearless is living in spite of those things that scare you to death."
— Taylor Swift

this has to be one of my favorites!

on Mar. 8 2010 at 7:32 pm
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
22 articles 0 photos 281 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The goal isn't to live forever, but create something that will."
"If you wanna go, baby let's go; if you wanna rock, I'm ready to roll.''
"No one ever said it'd be easy. They just said it'd be worth it." <3

haa no prob. id luv 2. thxx!! :)

on Mar. 8 2010 at 2:43 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
11 articles 0 photos 1029 comments

Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-
XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx


SciArc

MacMillan Books

Aspiring Writer? Take Our Online Course!