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Who I Am

February 26, 2010
By xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
22 articles 0 photos 281 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The goal isn't to live forever, but create something that will."
"If you wanna go, baby let's go; if you wanna rock, I'm ready to roll.''
"No one ever said it'd be easy. They just said it'd be worth it." <3


You like me for me,
for what I can be;
For who I am.
You see through the flimsy
mask I put up for
protection;
For who I really am.
You roll your intuitive eyes
at my naive, inane words;
Because you know who I am.
You are my one and only
vulnerability, breaking
through my outershell with
every glance;
I love you for who you are;
Is it possible for you to
love me for who I am?


The author's comments:
this is about a guy who's really intrigued by this girl who really understands him, like no one else does.
She's got somewhat of an outcast attitude toward him, and he wants to see if she could fall for him

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on May. 13 2010 at 2:20 pm
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
22 articles 0 photos 281 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The goal isn't to live forever, but create something that will."
"If you wanna go, baby let's go; if you wanna rock, I'm ready to roll.''
"No one ever said it'd be easy. They just said it'd be worth it." <3

thankk u so much! i actually waznt rele sure bout this 1 & didnt like it dat much. glad u liked it! ur comment means alot:)

on May. 3 2010 at 12:22 pm
imperfection GOLD, Gilroy, California
17 articles 9 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Dream as though you'll live forever, live as though you'll die today."
~James Dean (1931-1955), American Motion Picture Actor, symbol of rebellion

I like your use of vocabulary, and I love the meaning, especially the part with the flimsy mask... :) Awesome job! Keep Writing!


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