February 26, 2010
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Too tense, too frustrated, too much
too deaf in the ears, too sensitive to touch.
Too overcome with anguish and pain
Too fed up with childish games.
Too through, too done, too ready to correct
Too old to do this and too mature to do that.
Too much over the top happening everyday
Too many things getting in my way.
Too tired for games, too through with toys.
Too young for heartache, waiting for joys.
Too much noise, too much silence, too much in between
Too much fakeness, surrealness, things not as they seem.
Too much to do and too little time to do
Too many things that will never come through.
Too many things happening before my very young eyes
Too much hatred, secrets, pain and lies.
It seems as if life is hardly still entact
When asked to do, a voice whispered- RELAX.

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Bunnie23 said...
Oct. 13, 2010 at 2:21 pm
I think that this is a very good poem! I think you are a very intellegent person and this poem shows it.  It speaks out to me and makes me think because it is a deep poem. Keep up the GREAT work!!!
XDunk said...
Oct. 12, 2010 at 6:11 pm
I love this poem it has such passion. It speaks to everyone. Awesome work MsTrish.
Sarah23 said...
Aug. 4, 2010 at 12:02 pm
I love this poem :) Everyone defines themselves with this poem. 
Milo! said...
Mar. 9, 2010 at 8:28 pm
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.
KrazyAJ replied...
Mar. 15, 2010 at 11:28 am
Thanks. I would love to read some of your work. That comment meant a lot because it was my first positive feedback from someone I don't know.
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