February 25, 2010
I could hear the seconds ticking by,
Our time together coming to an end,
Quicker than either of us wants it to.


They say time is the only remedy for a break-up.
They say time is what heals the soul.
They say time is the only thing you need to heal the pain.

But what if time is what is killing you?
What if it's the time that we're apart that's killing me?
What if it's the time that's hurting me, tearing me apart?

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Shahed said...
Mar. 12, 2010 at 7:47 pm
1st to comment lucky me!
You know I always try to write about time.. to me it been something SO important -- and it really has value!
I really liked it! <3
xLoVeLyCuTiEe428x replied...
Apr. 7, 2010 at 5:04 pm


Time definitely is hard to write about.

Shahed replied...
Apr. 7, 2010 at 5:05 pm
O yes! I strongly agree,, time is hard to write about ..
xLoVeLyCuTiEe428x replied...
Apr. 8, 2010 at 8:47 am
I like "You're Everything!" It's a good poem. You're a good writer.
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