The funny part

February 25, 2010
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I'm a rock, a hard unbreakable thing.
The one you can insult and she won't even feel a thing.
The one who fights instead of loves.
The one no one can beat.

That was, untill I met you,
you swore the world to me, we would be together
now and forever.
You said I was the best,
that you wouldn't trade me for any of the rest.

But like any guy, you left.
You taught me a lesson I shall never forget.
To never trust again.
To never fall again.

Now I roam, the streets alone.
Waiting for you to come home.
I should have listen to my consicous.
And never to my heart.
But I guess I've learn my lesson, fairly clear.
To be a rock than a doll you can through around.

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olican16 said...
Jul. 21, 2010 at 2:45 pm
this is sooooo good!!!! love all of your stuff!!
Squishy-Squish replied...
Jul. 23, 2010 at 1:10 pm
→Thank you very much :)
olican16 replied...
Aug. 3, 2010 at 3:47 pm
thanks... check out my stuff?
Sill_Sitter11 said...
Jul. 20, 2010 at 9:17 am
I liked it but the flow was kind of off because there were different amounts of lines in each Stanza which kind of... made it off.
Squishy-Squish replied...
Jul. 23, 2010 at 1:11 pm
→Thanks for commenting and for the feed back :)
Sarbear This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 10, 2010 at 3:06 pm
Wow, I liked this! It flowed really well and it was different from all the typical love poems. Good job
Squishy-Squish replied...
Mar. 10, 2010 at 6:10 pm
Thanks Sarah. Just thought of it and wrote it. Happy to know you like it :)
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