The New Fire

February 25, 2010
By 11fresemily BRONZE, Kenton, Ohio
11fresemily BRONZE, Kenton, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Never Let The Fear Of Striking Out Keep You From Playing The Game"

Long ago when cavemen were alive, they all decided to have a

sleepover. They were out in the cold night with no blankets or

anything. Just the clothes they had on their backs. It had started

raining and lighting outside, a loud sound that was heard by one of

the cavemen, Frankie.

He ran over to see what the sound was, and he was shocked.

He had never seen anything like it before. It was fire. The

lighting had struck a tree and caused a fire. He was shocked; he

didn’t know what to do. He ran up to the fire yelling for his

friend’s Ryan and Brad.

When they all got over there and started talking, they realized that

since the tree was wood and the lighting was hot, that it had caused

a fire! So they thought since they had a fire and it could cook

things, maybe they would try to cook some food they had had got

earlier. One thing they had was this big ol’ chicken. It looked so

good that Frankie, Brad and Ryan could barely wait to eat it. Their

mouths were drooling. They had finally found something that

could make their food hot and delicious. As they got the fire going,

they realized they needed something to cook the chicken on.

Therefore, Brad and Ryan went looking for some sticks.

Finally, an hour later, Brad and Ryan had found the perfect stick.

So they put the chicken on the stick and started cooking. Finally,

after getting their bellies full, they decided it was time to lie down

and rest.

As night came, they stayed snug and warm because of their

fire. However, later that night, Brad was sleeping and woke up

because he smelled smoke. And right in front of him, up in flames,

were there entire woods they were staying at, burning very quickly,

all because of their new fire.

The author's comments:
I like this writing because its just something funny and something i can call my own.

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This article has 1 comment.

Milo! said...
on Mar. 13 2010 at 7:30 am
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.


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