Ocean blue

February 24, 2010
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As I watch I see every ripple that flows through,
every glisten and gleam from the blue.
Sunlight dances as I watch, radiating oh-so-beautifully,
shining wildly into my eyes.

Running my hands across, a cold finger runs down my back,
a surface so chilling though warmth settles through.

Sitting and watching my favorite thing to do.
Staring deep into the blue becoming lost with wonder.
Full of surprises it seems, I never know what they maybe,
For everything inevitably comes upon your shore.
As I sit and reminisce in your vast and intense darkness,
looking deep within gives me peace,
in the silence respect flows through me,
your strength radiating.
I feel it in my bones and I’m slowly craving more,
feeling your touch now everything flows clearly.

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reillysmiley22 said...
Apr. 19, 2010 at 8:08 pm
creates really strong, intense pictures in my mind- this is extremely good
yasmin said...
Apr. 19, 2010 at 12:50 am
hi, i really like this. :) what was your inspiration for it? i hope you keep writing.
cjsweetie replied...
May 1, 2010 at 11:25 am
my boyfriend did...
LuisManuel said...
Mar. 23, 2010 at 4:54 pm
Cj that was awesome,...! I liked it!
BasketballChick5 replied...
Mar. 31, 2010 at 8:57 pm
 liked this one too:):) keep writting.
Sarbear This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 23, 2010 at 3:06 pm
this definately made me think. well done!
JeanGrey said...
Mar. 22, 2010 at 12:19 pm
I love it! Very deep and emotional..great! keep writing!
cjsweetie replied...
Mar. 23, 2010 at 9:37 am
Thank you lots
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