Unknown Passion

March 3, 2010
By Ladie2 BRONZE, Greenville, Alabama
Ladie2 BRONZE, Greenville, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
You don't know who love you until they are gone.


His love is passionate
And indescribable
The smile he gives me
Changes my mood
His touch defeats me
If defeats my love of cued.
I dream to dream of him
When the sun leaves me alone
My eyes are tightly shut
As I see us both in this zone
A zone of love
Us walking hand to hand
Watching the water
In our own made land.
as i am thinking in this dream
You have shown me so many things
I never had seen.
There is so much you give me
That I cannot return
Our unknown passion
Is my only concern


The author's comments:
I wanted to dedicated this to you
Jakorei M

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Ladie2 BRONZE said...
on Aug. 31 2010 at 6:45 pm
Ladie2 BRONZE, Greenville, Alabama
4 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
You don't know who love you until they are gone.

thankyoo!!!

on Aug. 30 2010 at 11:49 pm
thewriteidea DIAMOND, Pleasanton, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry that it's over, smile because it has happened."

this has really great flow. your sentences are not choppy at all and that is a main point in a poem. flow matters a lot. you're a great writer!

check out some of my work, too if you'd like. great job on this! keep writing!!(:



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