a younger version of her

March 3, 2010
By woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all."


she was beyond violent
she was transcendently obsessed with Evil
she was mentally disturbed
she executed the Devil and beyond
she caused destruction
she brought Hell upon our kingdom
she unleashed darkness upon our innocent souls
i have been observing Her upon my birth
as every second of my life passed by
it felt as if i was becoming
a younger version of Her
i forbade myself to look in the mirror
for i grew beastier by the second
i grew fearless
i grew heartless
i grew inhuman
i did not like it nor embraced it
years passed as i isolated myself from life and all
but i was still observing Her
and she was as beyond Evil as ever
one day i decided to look in the mirror
and see who i have become over those years
when i looked in the mirror i saw Her
she smirked at me with beautiful Evil eyes
just then i hurled a black skull at the mirror
causing it to shatter
as i saw Her falling apart her Evil smirk fading
she was all covered in blood
Her soul was parting Her
as she was trying to catch the helpless hand of life
but it was too late
for a wind blew Her Spirit and soul
freeing us as the dawn of a new day
could be glimpsed now
Her reign was over
and i am no longer Her slave nor
a younger version of Her
i am Her...



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on Sep. 4 2010 at 1:48 pm
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all."

omg thanks so much midnightangel ;]

on Aug. 28 2010 at 9:57 pm
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND, Westerlo, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I'm not"
"Somewhere betweeen us talking, you saying I deserve better, and you making me laugh when I wanted to cry, I fell in love with you."

I'm a Christian too, but some of my poems (not on Teenink) are phscyo. I totally love your work! Its amazing! You really picture it while your reading it.

on May. 13 2010 at 11:01 pm
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all."

i keep commenting but nothing happens lol...thx guys

on May. 13 2010 at 10:26 pm
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all."

omg thx but i had to make some changes cuz the original was too insane andim  christian [x-member of choir] so i dont wanna cross the line thats why all of my poems have two versions lol

on May. 13 2010 at 9:20 pm
woundedcondor GOLD, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"if you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all."

omg thank you so very much...i had to make some changes to it though because the original version was too insane lol im christian [ex-member of the choir] and so i dont way go over the limit..every time i cross the line i take a step back thats why all my poems have two versions lol....omg am i boring u

on May. 11 2010 at 4:59 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Get, Got, Gotten.

this is really a great peice and ending-I love the ending. youre gonna be great one day-I can feel it....theres something in the air.....(5 stars)......


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