March 2, 2010
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I know what it means, what it feels like, how it happens.
I've waited to understand it all.
and now that finally I do,
now that I know what it's like to have a part of your soul with someone else,
I'm pretty sure I can't stand it.
I can't stand the waiting, the frustration, or the paranoia.
The only solution is to give up. Move on.
It might help if i knew how...

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BreonnBurse This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 16, 2010 at 7:42 pm
Dang. this was like wow.
I felt what you were saying girl..
It was subliminal but obvious. Bravo.
hellogirl said...
Mar. 15, 2010 at 2:35 pm
That was soooo real and beautiful I liked it.:)
abby.track said...
Mar. 13, 2010 at 8:56 am
That was soo beautiful, I loved it.
chrissmd replied...
Mar. 13, 2010 at 8:42 pm
thank you :]
DanceBabyDance said...
Mar. 11, 2010 at 4:45 pm
I really love this poem because I think that everyone can relate to feeling as though they need to move on, but that they arent quite sure how. Brava! Very well written and very full of passion!
Milo! said...
Mar. 11, 2010 at 3:27 pm
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.
torimcree11693 said...
Mar. 10, 2010 at 3:19 pm
i can relate to this because it has happend to me so many times but i managed to get over the heart break with the help of my brothers.
Jess95 said...
Mar. 9, 2010 at 8:46 pm
I like it...and i can really relate...i've had my heart riped away from me...but not in the way a man loves a women, more in the way you love your sister or your best friend.
chrissmd said...
Mar. 8, 2010 at 8:28 pm
thank you :) honestly, i wrote it in about five minutes. but i was just feeling really inspired at the time, so it just kind of poured out. so glad you like it!
georgiab said...
Mar. 8, 2010 at 5:30 pm
really cool. simple but so powerful abstract!
Aislinnnnn:) said...
Mar. 8, 2010 at 9:07 am
i like your style.
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