Finally

March 2, 2010
By chrissmd SILVER, Woonsocket, Rhode Island
chrissmd SILVER, Woonsocket, Rhode Island
7 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you find yourself in love with a person who does not love you, be gentle with yourself. There is nothing wrong with you. Love just didn't choose to rest in the other person's heart."


I know what it means, what it feels like, how it happens.
I've waited to understand it all.
and now that finally I do,
now that I know what it's like to have a part of your soul with someone else,
I'm pretty sure I can't stand it.
I can't stand the waiting, the frustration, or the paranoia.
The only solution is to give up. Move on.
It might help if i knew how...



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on Mar. 16 2010 at 7:42 pm
AllysenBursex3 SILVER, Gibsonton, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"I don't listen to the radio." <3

Dang. this was like wow.

I felt what you were saying girl..

It was subliminal but obvious. Bravo.

hellogirl GOLD said...
on Mar. 15 2010 at 2:35 pm
hellogirl GOLD, La Habra, California
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That was soooo real and beautiful I liked it.:)

on Mar. 13 2010 at 8:42 pm
chrissmd SILVER, Woonsocket, Rhode Island
7 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you find yourself in love with a person who does not love you, be gentle with yourself. There is nothing wrong with you. Love just didn't choose to rest in the other person's heart."

thank you :]

on Mar. 13 2010 at 8:56 am
kitkat.track787, Independence, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
Nobody ever dies, because they will live inside of everyone they ever touched, no matter how little, and the people who love them, their family, and friends. They’re never going to stop thinking about them, or talking about them. They’re never going to forget you because that never goes away. They will never die they were loved and they loved, they will live forever. We all will.

That was soo beautiful, I loved it.

on Mar. 11 2010 at 4:45 pm
KaitlynnNicole PLATINUM, Heyworth, Illinois
39 articles 6 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
From me: "The Point of writing isn't so others can understand what's going on in your mind. It's so you can understand what's going on inside yourself."

By me: "Who needs you when I have these yellow lines on this road?"

I really love this poem because I think that everyone can relate to feeling as though they need to move on, but that they arent quite sure how. Brava! Very well written and very full of passion!

Milo! said...
on Mar. 11 2010 at 3:27 pm
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.

on Mar. 10 2010 at 3:19 pm
torim11693 SILVER, Bastrop, Texas
7 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
live the life you love,love the life you live.

i can relate to this because it has happend to me so many times but i managed to get over the heart break with the help of my brothers.

Jess95 GOLD said...
on Mar. 9 2010 at 8:46 pm
Jess95 GOLD, Morgan Hill, California
19 articles 14 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
If I were you I'd promise to live life for all it's worth, take all you've been given and leave your mark upon this Earth. Trust your heart to show you everything you need...and if you were you, I'd fall in love with me. -unknown


fear not, for I am with you;


be not dismayed, for I am your God;

I will strengthen you, I will help you,


I will uphold you with my righteous right hand.
(Isaiah 41:10 ESV)

I like it...and i can really relate...i've had my heart riped away from me...but not in the way a man loves a women, more in the way you love your sister or your best friend.

on Mar. 8 2010 at 8:28 pm
chrissmd SILVER, Woonsocket, Rhode Island
7 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you find yourself in love with a person who does not love you, be gentle with yourself. There is nothing wrong with you. Love just didn't choose to rest in the other person's heart."

thank you :) honestly, i wrote it in about five minutes. but i was just feeling really inspired at the time, so it just kind of poured out. so glad you like it!

on Mar. 8 2010 at 5:30 pm
georgiab PLATINUM, Whitman, Massachusetts
20 articles 0 photos 10 comments
really cool. simple but so powerful abstract!

on Mar. 8 2010 at 9:07 am
Aislinnnnn:) GOLD, Parkesburg, Pennsylvania
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i like your style.


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