I love you

March 2, 2010
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The only thing that was on my mind,
as soon as I walked in,
was the look inside your eyes,
you looked so sunken in.
I felt the love,
the truth,
the pain,
but I only think those words you sang.
You told me once,
over the phone,
three little words,
were so alone,
but these three words,
they broke my heart,
they took out the sun,
and put the mark.
The mark of pain,
and tears,
you wouldn't let me go,
my dear.
So now I cry,
because three words,
you said a lie,
of heart
no birds.
The words
that broke
my heart
in two,
were three small words,
named 'I love you.'

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Felicia said...
Mar. 16, 2010 at 8:16 pm
i like this. it happens to a lot of people and hundreds can relate to it
choirchic101 said...
Mar. 13, 2010 at 11:06 pm
hun this was good. i liked it. it was really sweet and honest
DanceBabyDance said...
Mar. 11, 2010 at 4:47 pm
Darling, this poem is amazingly good! I love it! I almost started crying and Im sure that im not the only one to tear up! Wonderfully done!
Tiff(: This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 11, 2010 at 4:06 pm
This was a great poem! "Three words" was slightly excessive however.
.:Snoopy:. said...
Mar. 11, 2010 at 2:02 pm
i could totally relate...made me really think <3 i loved it
Raychell D. said...
Mar. 10, 2010 at 1:40 pm
I Love The Last Few Lines! It's Always The Best Part For Me When The Less Words There Are At The End, The More Powerful The Impact Can Be! <3
WaterQueen07 said...
Mar. 9, 2010 at 6:33 pm
I live the way some of the lines rhyme so easily. This is a great poem.
xXStephmeisterXx said...
Mar. 9, 2010 at 6:11 pm
i liked this very much. i have felt the same way before and you hit it dead on!!
Larissa S. said...
Mar. 9, 2010 at 7:48 am
wow...... loved this .....very good jobb
Aislinnnnn:) said...
Mar. 8, 2010 at 9:05 am
very true. when people say i love you and dont mean it, it does break your heart in two.
a-mazing! :)
INnaturegirl said...
Mar. 8, 2010 at 7:21 am
i love this so much
great jod :D
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