I love you

March 2, 2010
By Jtine BRONZE, Kalispell, Montana
Jtine BRONZE, Kalispell, Montana
4 articles 2 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
" This is your life, and it is your choice of how you make it."


The only thing that was on my mind,
as soon as I walked in,
was the look inside your eyes,
you looked so sunken in.
I felt the love,
the truth,
the pain,
but I only think those words you sang.
You told me once,
over the phone,
three little words,
were so alone,
but these three words,
they broke my heart,
they took out the sun,
and put the mark.
The mark of pain,
anger,
and tears,
you wouldn't let me go,
my dear.
So now I cry,
because three words,
you said a lie,
of heart
no birds.
The words
that broke
my heart
in two,
were three small words,
named 'I love you.'



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Felicia GOLD said...
on Mar. 16 2010 at 8:16 pm
Felicia GOLD, Chandler, Arizona
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i like this. it happens to a lot of people and hundreds can relate to it

on Mar. 13 2010 at 11:06 pm
choirchic101 SILVER, Norwalk, California
9 articles 0 photos 196 comments

Favorite Quote:
in order for God to use all of you you have to be completely broken

hun this was good. i liked it. it was really sweet and honest

on Mar. 11 2010 at 4:47 pm
KaitlynnNicole PLATINUM, Heyworth, Illinois
39 articles 6 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
From me: "The Point of writing isn't so others can understand what's going on in your mind. It's so you can understand what's going on inside yourself."

By me: "Who needs you when I have these yellow lines on this road?"

Darling, this poem is amazingly good! I love it! I almost started crying and Im sure that im not the only one to tear up! Wonderfully done!

on Mar. 11 2010 at 4:06 pm
Tiffanie_marie GOLD, Sedro-Woolley, Washington
18 articles 1 photo 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't tell me the sky is the limit, when there are footprints on the moon.

This was a great poem! "Three words" was slightly excessive however.

on Mar. 11 2010 at 2:02 pm
iloveyou... BRONZE, Winston-Salem, North Carolina
2 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Live the life you love, Love the life you live."

i could totally relate...made me really think <3 i loved it

on Mar. 10 2010 at 1:40 pm
raychell.faith GOLD, Somewhere You Left Your Heart, California
12 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You Risk Tears If You Let Yourself Be Tamed;" The Little Prince

I Love The Last Few Lines! It's Always The Best Part For Me When The Less Words There Are At The End, The More Powerful The Impact Can Be! <3

on Mar. 9 2010 at 6:33 pm
WaterQueen07 GOLD, Chardon, Ohio
16 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
Gerard Way: "Hey, girls, you're beautiful. Don't look at those stupid magazines with sticklike models. Eat healthy and exercise. That's all. Don't let anyone tell you you're not good enough. You're good enough, you are too good. Love your family with all your heart and listen to it. You are gorgeous, whether you're a size 4 or 14. It doesn't matter what you look like on the outside, as long as you're a good person, as long as you respect others. I know it's been told hundreds of times before, but it's true. Hey, girls, you are beautiful."

I live the way some of the lines rhyme so easily. This is a great poem.

on Mar. 9 2010 at 6:11 pm
xXStephmeisterXx BRONZE, Apopka, Florida
3 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never let fear get in the way of what you truly desire.

i liked this very much. i have felt the same way before and you hit it dead on!!

on Mar. 9 2010 at 7:48 am
softlylara BRONZE, Staten Island, New York
4 articles 2 photos 15 comments
wow...... loved this .....very good jobb

on Mar. 8 2010 at 9:05 am
Aislinnnnn:) GOLD, Parkesburg, Pennsylvania
11 articles 0 photos 6 comments
very true. when people say i love you and dont mean it, it does break your heart in two.

a-mazing! :)

INnaturegirl said...
on Mar. 8 2010 at 7:21 am
wow

i love this so much

great jod :D


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