Me without you

well, excuse me, but i wrote that by MYSELF... if you have a hard time believing that, 2 bad...

i think its very good you don't need a lot of words. it's just how people feel when they lost a love one they don't use a lot of words ether they are in to much pain

I feel like this needs more. Maybe go in deeper and talk about how you feel without your loved one. Use similes and work into how you feel. I do like simple poems too, but I feel like you left me short. Good job though, and keep writing!!
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its a good poem but i doesnt have much emotions in it when i read a poem i like to feel what the author is feeling

I thin you had a great and meaningfl poem going but I was surprised to see it so short. In my opinon you should have made It a bit longer. Other than that it was wonderful. I can truly relate to it!! :) ~

This sounds like the song Without You from the musical Rent. I really like it and it's very true. You should add more stanzas though, but it does convey the emotion well. ^.^

I was okay because it sounded to much like you got it off the internet. You could have put more power in it. But keep it up

this is impressive. it perfectly describes the feeling so many people struggle to explain in so few words. great job.

These are my favorite types of poems short but full of emotion. I like it

i like this, sweet and to the point