Wishing i could

February 24, 2010
My world used to be,
Dark, scary,
And lonely.
Until one day,
I found him.
He brought his light,
Into my world.

Brightening my darkness,
Scaring away the scary,
Leaving behind the lonelyness.
He saved me,
From the demons.
They almost consumed me,
They almost took me away.

He's light,
Brightens my world.
My world gets brighter,
More and more,
Each day.

When i'm with you,
I feel complete.
When we're apart,
I feel empty.
When i'm alone,
I think about you,
I think about us.

Wishing i could,
Be with you.
Wishing i could,
Hold you so.

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Sarbear This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 16, 2010 at 5:44 pm
This is good! I like how you shortened your sentences until you were to the end... well done! Keep writing and check out my work too:-)
Darkness.Arising replied...
Mar. 19, 2010 at 7:58 am
thanks and i will check them out
Squishy-Squish said...
Mar. 12, 2010 at 6:24 pm
Nice :) I love it. He's one spcial boy. [Remember not in the halls]
blankpages12 said...
Mar. 9, 2010 at 10:33 am
that is woahh great..i love it
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