February 24, 2010
Boredom is like hell,
There is no escape.
You are doomed,
Forever to hold your peace.
Nothing can help you,
Your stuck in this nothingness.

It's pitch black,
No one can see,
Not even the strong eyes.
It's like your in the darkness,
Never coming out of the trench.

You feel your life,
It's beginning to end.
Nothings stopping you,
Your beginning to fade.
You can't see your hand,
You've become invisible now....

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rainbowwriter said...
Mar. 10, 2010 at 5:34 pm
Its very interesting. It took me a few times to read it over to understand the whole point but that's what it takes to be a good piece of writing. Well done!
Darkness.Arising replied...
Mar. 11, 2010 at 11:55 am
haha thanks it did take me a while
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