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The rain comes down hard
It beats down on my back
But I try to get through
With my hope still intact
It’s not always easy
To push through the rain
Sometimes these trials
Will make you insane
You might stop believing
That dreams can come true
But if you keep trying
You’ll always get through
You may not be strong
You may feel so small
But you can be powerful
Don’t let yourself fall
Don’t let mistakes
Rob you of hope
They make you stronger
They help you to cope
You have to keep going
And follow your heart
None of those obstacles
Can tear you apart
Never stop hoping
Don’t be forlorn
Because if you’re determined
You’ll break through the storm





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BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 11, 2010 at 4:45 pm
youre quite a motivational speaker. this is really powerful. thats alot coming from someone who doesnt believe in that motivational crap(me). 5 stars captain.
 
penguin35 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 22, 2010 at 6:28 am
Thank you! :) I need to try to motivate myself because I'm often lazy.
 
faypirate23 replied...
May 24, 2010 at 10:21 pm
i wrote a poem similar to this good work partner love it going in my faves ;)
 
penguin35 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 25, 2010 at 1:50 pm
Well, thanks :)
 
faypirate23 replied...
May 25, 2010 at 3:11 pm
you should read my stuff...well i mean u dont have to but it would be quite dandy if u did
 
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