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I Remember
I remember myself saying I loved him
Knowing he said it back
But I dont like how my feelings wont let you be in my past
He left on my 7th birthday without saying goodbye
I thought I was his little girl
Daddy you made me cry
He said he'd never leave me behind
I Remember
I remember him not saying Happy Birthday
Knowing I wasnt on his mind
He stared at me once and turned his back without a fight
I Remember
I remember he walked right past me and didnt tend to care
Well I ran after him knowing it wasnt fair
He pushed someone out of his way and that someone was me
Now everytime I question myself " What He Loves Me?"
I was seven, thought our family was great!
I guess I thought wrong, Daddy everyone makes mistakes
I was the one who forgave you and brought you back into my life
But your the dad who turned their back and got a new wife.
He's My Memory




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rainbowwriterThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 10, 2010 at 5:48 pm:
I really like how this was well written and still easy to relate to.
 
Candace R. replied...
Mar. 10, 2010 at 6:31 pm :
Thanks! Yea i thinks thats one of my favorite poems Ive wrote so far...It was real personal to me but so hard to write! Im glad you liked it.
 
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