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Crumbling Heart

February 24, 2010
By MorganRaeRae BRONZE, Grove City, Ohio
MorganRaeRae BRONZE, Grove City, Ohio
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As she looks at him, her heart crumbles and she must hold herself tight to make the pain go away. Maybe it's for the best, maybe she deserves it. Maybe she saw it coming, but her heart ignored it, for the love she felt was so strong and there was no way it could go wrong. In the end love did not prevail and she is stuck. She had to make the biggest decision of her life alone. Advice? Help? Hope? Love? Nothing will fix this, it's her against the world. Friends might help, but they can never provide her the love that once kept a smile on her face and hope in her now empty heart.

The author's comments:
This is my life. We were perfect, but he decided I wasn't good enough for him.

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on Mar. 7 2010 at 2:11 pm
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND, Westerlo, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I'm not"
"Somewhere betweeen us talking, you saying I deserve better, and you making me laugh when I wanted to cry, I fell in love with you."

Wow. What a jerk. You write beautiful poetry. I went through that with a guy. Your way to good for him. :-)