February 22, 2010
By VictoriaE GOLD, Goodyear, Arizona
VictoriaE GOLD, Goodyear, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
"I know who I am. I don't need suggestions on who I should be."

You wait a lifetime
And in one night, it’s fought away
You stare at the moon, crying as it shines
As you sit, you pray
One word can be taken so far
Too many things were said
Your vision is blurred, except for the stars
You let him walk, refusing to beg
The breeze rustling your hair
As you force yourself to stop, to not care
Your feel your heart seize to beat

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on Mar. 8 2010 at 12:24 am
hxcRocker DIAMOND, Haiku, Hawaii
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I definitely know what you mean. I've waited a life for this...and now it's gone. It feels good to stare at the stars with tears in your eyes. It's good. Keep it up. Check out my work if you have time. i have got a few about heartbreak too


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