The Chaining of Two Broken Souls

February 27, 2010
By the.kanguru GOLD, Irvine, California
the.kanguru GOLD, Irvine, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Why is Jesus holding a machine gun?"
"Maybe it's part of his therapy."


Leave me, and I will vanish.
Stay with me, and I will shatter into a billion fragments of bitterness.
Separate me from you, and I am forever incomplete.
In this dark fairy tale where we are together, I die slowly a thousand times, and my lives fly away on paper birds with chained souls.
Say that you need me, and it will be a shadow of what I feel for you in this empty chest of mine.
Please, tell me that I exist.
He. Did. Not. Deserve. Her.
Take everything and give nothing, I find that I do not care.
I am your completion.
I search for your smile and receive trails of tears.
She walked away into a world where he could not follow.
Our hearts, long dead, pound as one to the rhythm of our pulsing pain.
He was lost, all over again.



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on Jul. 6 2010 at 6:15 pm
christin.bass SILVER, Eagle River, Alaska
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you will never make it big if you dream small. youll never learn if your living in the past and youll never understand if you were to fast forward, just press play and live!

Wow is right. Your writing gives me chills. This is absolutely amazing!!!!

on Apr. 13 2010 at 9:01 pm
FreakyEyed DIAMOND, Juneau, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
"This, too, will pass."

^,^ Whoo, I feel appreciated! Haha, I don't know, your stuff is amazing, too. I LOVED your short story.

on Apr. 12 2010 at 10:29 pm
the.kanguru GOLD, Irvine, California
16 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Why is Jesus holding a machine gun?"
"Maybe it's part of his therapy."

thank you very much! means a lot coming from you, i really enjoyed reading your work. :)

on Apr. 11 2010 at 6:12 pm
FreakyEyed DIAMOND, Juneau, Alaska
53 articles 29 photos 111 comments

Favorite Quote:
"This, too, will pass."

Wow... this is quite powerful.

"...and my lives fly away on paper birds...
Say that you need me, and it will be a shadow of what I feel for you..."

Man, I love this!


Escaped GOLD said...
on Mar. 5 2010 at 12:51 pm
Escaped GOLD, Litchfield, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"Lets go make daisy chains in the grass, but only if its 74 degrees or above. I would like to fall in love with you." (:

Absolutely beautiful(:

Please read some of my own.

on Mar. 5 2010 at 11:13 am
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-
XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx


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