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Love will Hurt

Love is pain
Love will hurt
It will crush you
If your heart breaks
Love seems
Like such a great thing
Until the moment
When someone breaks your heart
They crush it
And break it
Until nothing is left
But little pieces
For you to pick up
And put back together again
Like a jigsaw puzzle
Except this time
It's missing a piece
And that peice
May never
Be fixed
Again



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enchanted4yu said...
Mar. 20, 2010 at 12:40 am:
Very good I like your writing style. Constructive Criticism: I think it would have been even better if you ended saying how it is possible to find love DESPITE all the things that will go wrong (cuz they will haha) but overall i liked it ur a great writer
 
Squidney1014 replied...
Mar. 20, 2010 at 2:00 pm :
Thank you for your opinion and thanks for saying I'm a great writer! You're great, too.
 
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lovespromise<3 said...
Mar. 6, 2010 at 7:06 pm:
Beutifully Awesome!
 
Squidney1014 replied...
Mar. 6, 2010 at 8:24 pm :
aw thanks so much!
 
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