Boy Meets Girl

February 26, 2010
He enters the room and spots her.
She sees him enter the room.

He swallowed hard.
She bit her tongue.

He laughed weakly.
She cried hysterically.

He winked at her.
She smiled at him.

He told her he loved her.
She told him he loved him.

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agsmiley888 said...
Mar. 20, 2010 at 7:32 pm
aww its cute
xLoVeLyCuTiEe428x replied...
Apr. 7, 2010 at 5:03 pm
Thanks... <3
Milo! said...
Mar. 10, 2010 at 3:31 pm
I really like this. It really makes you think, but in the end it's kind of up to you what happened beforehand.
xLoVeLyCuTiEe428x replied...
Apr. 7, 2010 at 5:01 pm
I sort of wanted it to be mysterious, something you can guess about what already happened and what is going to happen.
xBaByGiRrL22x said...
Mar. 5, 2010 at 6:34 pm
this is really good! mysterious. i luv that in pieces & articlez. can i ask u something though? wht's the theme 4 this? did they just meet or is this 1 of those deja vu things when they meet again?
xLoVeLyCuTiEe428x replied...
Apr. 7, 2010 at 5:02 pm

I don't know.

When I was writing it, I thought they had a past . . . but I thought it sounded better more mysterious. You guess what you think will happen and what already has.

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