February 26, 2010
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It is a big fear to me but enhances the exhiliration,
Now I am diving,falling,descending,
My petrified heart fell deep in my chest,
As the wind blew every strand of hair upwards,
Presenting me with a thrill..
I am not afraid, I will triumph, conquer, and win the fight with the fear that is,


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BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 19, 2010 at 11:47 am
I read something and saw your comment that said read my stuff and give me constructive criticism and nice comments. I'm not going to give you too much criticism cause I might not know what I'm talking about. but I'll read all of your stuuff and I'll be honest:) I think it's good that you can write about something so meaningless(to me)-and give it so much imagery and emotion.
Moonbeam13 said...
Apr. 12, 2010 at 5:56 am
It did inspire me to reach to the stars!:) Also I love how when you write poetry it all flows together.
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