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Beautiful world to brown.

February 23, 2010
By Olderatheart GOLD, Valley Stream, New York
Olderatheart GOLD, Valley Stream, New York
10 articles 1 photo 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Its our choices that show who we are, far more than our abilities"- HP


And we were so in love
You and me, forever we’ll always be together
Isn’t that what you told me?
And I don’t know how you liked me
Just me
And you were so plain to everyone else
But yet, so beautiful to me,
Those plain brown eyes showed me a whole new world filled with color
And i wouldn’t trade it for anything

And we played around
Staying up late sitting on the hood of your car
Sneaking out and getting a little too drunk

And you told me you were leaving,
Going away to the army
You asked me to wait for you
Buti couldn’tdo that. I knew I couldn’t/

And I knew this would be the last goodbye,
As I looked into those brown eyes of yours
What once used to seem so beautiful to me,
Were just,
Brown.



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Mspi18 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 3 2010 at 6:36 pm
Mspi18 BRONZE, Lawrence, New York
1 article 5 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Outside of a dog, a book is man's best friend. Inside of a dog, it's too dark to read."
Groucho Marx

this was really amazing. i love your work.