Microscope

February 22, 2010
By HPGGMRAR GOLD, Kennesaw, Georgia
HPGGMRAR GOLD, Kennesaw, Georgia
14 articles 6 photos 91 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I musn't forget I'm alive."
Ray Bradbury (Dandelion Wine)


Details
Swarming, looming ever closer
They surround us,
take away the beauty of life's mysteries
instead of letting them be
blinding us with the facts
stripping away the world's imagination

***

Details,
explanations, exaggerations
help the world to see
or do they
do they cloud the mind
or pulsate the senses?
let us be
or build stone fences
of irreplaceable,
anchored,
motionless,
static
facts.



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Sarahnade GOLD said...
on May. 18 2010 at 5:22 pm
Sarahnade GOLD, Bella Vista, Arkansas
15 articles 3 photos 10 comments
You have a very good, unique style building up here. I really love how the structure ties into the subject.

on May. 11 2010 at 6:35 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

either title is good- i like microscope-not that i understand but i like it. "blinded by the facts" i like that too. youre the bestessess. do your dance.

HPGGMRAR GOLD said...
on Mar. 8 2010 at 3:27 pm
HPGGMRAR GOLD, Kennesaw, Georgia
14 articles 6 photos 91 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I musn't forget I'm alive."
Ray Bradbury (Dandelion Wine)

This is the same piece as

"Details: Opinions", but under the title I prefer. Let me know what you think! :)


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