Falling to Pieces

February 22, 2010
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I watch as her life
slowly descends to
I watch as tears
slip down her face and say
She sits in the corner
and keeps quiet while
she slowly slips away.
People try to ask
why shes so upset
ask her why shes
so depressed.
She keeps the answers
tucked away, breaking
her apart,shes falling
to pieces right before
my eyes. She keeps secrets that
should be told, shes
falling apart and
nobody knows.
I watch her cry
day after day
I hear the sounds
of her sobs late at
night and wonder
when all her fallen
pieces will be found.

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KaitlynC said...
Nov. 30, 2010 at 12:54 pm
thankk youuu <33
BoosflashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 8, 2010 at 11:41 pm
I love this captain. its very emotional, like you're watching it from the window. and i love when you wonder when her fallen pieces'll be found. very nice. 5 stars.
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