Rapunsal and Her Long Hair

February 22, 2010
By jbutterfly10 GOLD, Bloomsburg, Pennsylvania
jbutterfly10 GOLD, Bloomsburg, Pennsylvania
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For those who believe that
Long hair can be quite a pain,
I'm sure you'd agree
That Rapunsal would go insane.

But imagine a man
Climbing up your locks!
I'm positive that she
Would be quite shocked.

I mean, a man you don't know,
Climbing up your hair like it was just yarn!
You should get to know him first,
Before you go quite that far.

I'm sure that Rapunsal
Would scream and fight.
I'm positive that she would yell,
"This just isn't right!"

She actually liked it,
There in the Tower.
She didn't want to be saved
By some pathetic coward.

Honestly, it's her hair,
Not some worthless heap.
If he can't buy a rope,
He's much to cheap!

I firmly believe that Rapunsal,
With a grin and a huff,
Would grab some scissors
And away she'd cut.


The author's comments:
I always felt bad for Rapunsal, so I wrote it in her honor.

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on Mar. 3 2010 at 2:44 pm
jbutterfly10 GOLD, Bloomsburg, Pennsylvania
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hey, to everyone who posts a comment, thanks. constructive critizism is welcome!!!


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