summer girl

February 22, 2010
By pieluver BRONZE, Blountsville, Alabama
pieluver BRONZE, Blountsville, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
"The silence isn't so bad till I look at my hand and feel sad cause the spaces between my fingers are were urs fit perfectly."


Eyes so blue, like the skys
My beautiful summer girl.
Hair brightes my day,
Like the rays of sunshine.
My beatiful summer girl.


My beautiful summer girl
Is my angel in the snow.
She warms me so
-my beautiful summer girl never melts and I will never let her go


The author's comments:
This poem was inspired my shiver sam wrote a song for grace. So I wrote a poem

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on Nov. 5 2010 at 12:46 pm
pieluver BRONZE, Blountsville, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
"The silence isn't so bad till I look at my hand and feel sad cause the spaces between my fingers are were urs fit perfectly."

thank you for your comments...... :)

on Mar. 31 2010 at 8:05 pm
elfiewrites BRONZE, Hillsdale, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"The seat of knowledge is in the head, of wisdom, in the heart."~William Hazlitt
"Be yourself, everyone else is taken."

What a sweet poem! Keep on writing! Please, if you get the chance, comment on my work too. I would greatly appreciate it. Thanks so much

on Mar. 23 2010 at 12:24 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Oh I love it

So sweet and innocent

just like summer love should be


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