My Pain

February 22, 2010
By Skeezics GOLD, Eatonville, Washington
Skeezics GOLD, Eatonville, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
A childs voice, however honest and true, is meaningless to those who have forgotten how to listen.
Everyone faces obsticals. What defines you is how you overcome them. -J.R. Celski


The slumber I do not seek
Presses down upon me in my time of sorrow.
The light outside unwelcome,
But the dark is ever worse.

There is no escape from the pain
Trapped inside with no way out.
I wish it would end, if only for a moment.
Just ease the pain for a second
To find relief from the sorrow.

It’s like a bird, caged and hurt
The others scorn and tantalize
As if they are so superior.
Will it ever end?

The question remains unanswered
With solution nowhere in sight.
What is there to do?
But weep.



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Skeezics GOLD said...
on May. 31 2010 at 9:43 pm
Skeezics GOLD, Eatonville, Washington
12 articles 0 photos 87 comments

Favorite Quote:
A childs voice, however honest and true, is meaningless to those who have forgotten how to listen.
Everyone faces obsticals. What defines you is how you overcome them. -J.R. Celski

thank you so much for the comment. i agree this poem is a bit dark. I you want to read some of my other stuff i wouldn't complain. (critism welcome) :)

on May. 31 2010 at 9:34 pm
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
22 articles 0 photos 281 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The goal isn't to live forever, but create something that will."
"If you wanna go, baby let's go; if you wanna rock, I'm ready to roll.''
"No one ever said it'd be easy. They just said it'd be worth it." <3

wow, this is very dark but powerful all the same. i luvv it. awesome wording. plzz keep writingg!


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