Way to Die

February 22, 2010
By urloveismydrug<3 BRONZE, Glenmont, Ohio
urloveismydrug<3 BRONZE, Glenmont, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"You know you love me :)"


She sits home alone
to cry and weep
He ripped apart her heart
now she can't even sleep
They say to cure a broken heart
is to just move on and forget
But how can she do that when she'd
rather be dead?

Heaving flash backs of the times they spent together
Saying "I love you" and how they'll be together forever
The memories eat her alive
from the inside out
Starting at her heart then going
all about
"Make this pain go away!!" she
screams to the skies
She picks up the blade
planning how she'll die.

"Will anyone miss me?" she
asks herself quietly
No, they won't my own mother
won't kiss me
As the blade goes down she screams one last time
Never regretting how she planned to die

Before the final breath
there's something up ahead
It's the light everyone talks about:
"Am I finally dead?"

A man speaks to her in a voice
so deep and gentle
"Girl, your time on Earth isn't done yet, why would you do something like this on something so little?"
To her is wasn't little, nothing could've been worst
But God didn't wait for a reply,
"It isn't time for you to die, I've got a plan for you first."

She wakes up in the hospital
people all around her bed
Crying and praying for her
not to be dead.
Life's so full of things yet
discovered
Don't try to end your life because
you never know when it's truly over.....


The author's comments:
I don't really know how to explain why I wrote this poem, my best friend and people I care about have thought about suicide for love. I just needed to get something out about it. I don't how it will effect any of you, but I hope it let's anyone realize that life isn't over. You just gotta live it, try to forget the pain. Even though it won't always go away.

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on Jul. 4 2010 at 11:31 pm
urloveismydrug<3 BRONZE, Glenmont, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"You know you love me :)"

hey! sorry i haven't been on here in so long, but I saw your post and I'm kinda glad you can relate to my poem because a lot of the time it feels like I'm the only one who feels like I do with a lot of the things that happen to me....but I hope everything is going GREAT! for you.

on Mar. 19 2010 at 6:44 pm
kincaid_ily BRONZE, Osteen, Florida
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i dont try to be captian wierd, im just me

omg this is embariseing but i can literly relaite to this i was head over heals for my ex-boyfriend and when we broke up i didnt know what to do or who to go to i had given my friends and my whole life to be with him then when he said it was over i didnt know what to do cause the same day i lost him my dad walked back in to my life!!! its still hard to walk down the hallway at school and see him all over my(ex)bestfriend..........but its better now i guess.........

taylor11 GOLD said...
on Mar. 11 2010 at 4:53 pm
taylor11 GOLD, Wauwatosa, Wisconsin
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im sorry :/

but i completely understand.

you are very welcome!

on Mar. 8 2010 at 4:07 pm
urloveismydrug<3 BRONZE, Glenmont, Ohio
4 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You know you love me :)"

yea me too, especially my best friend, cause I care about her so much. She has given me a lot of...inspiration for a lot of the things I do. but thanks for the comment

taylor11 GOLD said...
on Mar. 3 2010 at 1:40 pm
taylor11 GOLD, Wauwatosa, Wisconsin
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this is really good, but makes me feel sad about the people in your life who would do this


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